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Hook Pain Headlines

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Generate HOOK pain-focused ad headlines that name a core customer pain and stop the scroll on a priority feed channel.

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Pain-focused ad headlines

Objective. Produce a bank of pain-focused written hooks that name a real frustration the Customer Avatar already feels, so the right person stops mid-scroll on a priority feed channel.

Inputs this skill needs

  • [Core Pains] — the ranked pains and underlying fears from the Customer Avatar (Foundation: pains)
  • [Customer Avatar] — who they are and their awareness stage (Foundation: customer-avatar)
  • [Brand Voice Adjectives] — the voice the interrupt must still sound like (Foundation: brand-voice)
  • [Priority Channel] — the feed channel this batch is dressed for, and its fold/character constraint (Foundation: channels)

ROCKET prompt

ROLE: You are an expert direct-response copywriter working the pain-focused row of the Hook Grid, writing high-impact opening lines for ecommerce feed channels.

OBJECTIVE: Generate a bank of pain-focused written hooks that each name or agitate one specific [Core Pain], built to interrupt the pattern and signal relevance to exactly the right person.

CONTEXT: Work only from the Foundation Blueprint injected above. Draw on the [Core Pains] (and the fears beneath them), the [Customer Avatar] and their awareness stage, the [Brand Voice Adjectives], and the [Priority Channel] with its hard constraint. This is HOOK, Step 1 of the ATTRACT level — the first lever in the Multiplier Principle. These hooks lead to a GIFT, not a sales page, so every promise must be one the GIFT can keep (message match).

KEY INSTRUCTIONS:

  1. Choose one [Core Pain] (or fear beneath it) per hook; lead with specificity — name the real frustration, not its vague cousin ("Still wrestling with a spreadsheet every payday?", never "Tired of admin?").
  2. Generate 10 distinct hooks for the pain angle, drafting broad so the human can cut ruthlessly. Each must carry the pain-focused emotional trigger (frustration, recognition) and hint a solution exists without revealing the product.
  3. Respect the [Priority Channel] hard constraint (e.g. roughly the first 125 characters before "…see more" on a Facebook/Instagram feed); the front of the line carries the interrupt.
  4. Keep every hook in the [Brand Voice Adjectives] — the interrupt must still sound like the brand so attention won won is attention kept.
  5. Avoid the loud generic ("Amazing deals inside") — loudness is not interruption, specificity is. No cleverness that blurs relevance.
  6. For each hook note which pain it targets and the awareness stage it fits, so the message-match check against the GIFT is organised.

EXAMPLES (illustrative shapes only, never branded):

  • "Still [doing the painful workaround] every [recurring moment]?"
  • "The [hidden cost] you only notice once [the wrong thing happens]."
  • "[Specific person]: tired of [naming the exact frustration]?"

TONE & FORMAT: Adopt the [Brand Voice Adjectives]; British English; defer to elevate-voice for all customer-facing copy (no hype register, no fabricated proof). Output as the contract below.

Output contract

Write one Markdown file to companies/<slug>/playbook/1-hook/pain-headlines.md:

  • # Pain-Focused Hooks (H1)
  • A one-line note stating the [Priority Channel] and its character constraint.
  • ## Hooks — a numbered list of exactly 10 hooks. Each line: the hook in quotes, then — pain: [which Core Pain] · awareness: [stage].
  • ## Top picks — the 3 strongest (by number) with a one-line reason each.

British English. Customer-facing lines conform to elevate-voice. No fabricated stats. ~250–400 words.